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I just got back from covering an incident in Maywood on Wednesday (8/17/16). It was classified as a third-alarm fire, primarily due to the need for additional manpower and relief. The structure involved appeared to be an abandoned single-story commercial building next to a large, vacant wooden house. From what I could see, there was significant external fire damage, which might have spread to the smaller commercial building located in Sector 2. When I first arrived, there were quite a few firefighters actively working the scene, especially those operating trucks.
All the photos and a brief video from the event can be viewed here. These images really capture the intensity of the situation—there’s so much going on, from firefighters scaling ladders to others working on the roof amidst heavy smoke.
Here are some of the key moments captured during the incident:

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*

*Photo by Steve Redick*
It was definitely a challenging situation, but everyone seemed focused and determined to handle it effectively. There was a lot of coordination between different teams, and the firefighters worked tirelessly throughout the operation. If you want to see more details or follow up, feel free to check out the links I shared earlier.
Steve
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